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umm alright

tbh, this sounds a lot like a Linkin Park song.. so I don't really think it rates high on the originality, but I'll still give it points for not sounding bad (y), kudos, improve more, you have some potential.

Ignyte responds:

Linkin park is a band, im a solo artist, and I can assure you, there are no musicians or artists that influenced the making of this song, Only heart and soul.

Thanks for the review.
and yes, I do have a fair way to go ^_^;

catchy

that's all I could say, however, there is nothing much interesting here, the same chord sequence repeated over and over again, it does get boring, maybe if you added a bit of melody (vocals?) it would make it more interesting, you consider it a "pop" song anyways.

ALRMD responds:

i must admit, i agree.
i don't completely consider it to be pop. i just couldn't really think of a good genre to put it under, and i would kill for some good vocals, but i can't sing.

danceable

lively and very upbeat, a nice song to listen to when you're happy. Good work, hope you improve more though :)

Nice

it starts off slow then builds up, an accelerando is obvious, the pacing of this song is great, keep it up :)

Bak-R responds:

Thanks for it.

maybe You'll like this :

http://www.facebook.com/?ref=home#!/v ideo/video.php?v=1456367101946

you've got a good enough voice :)

your voice's emotional, but yeah whilst it's good it could also use some work because it's not perfect, and some work on your vocals will help you get better. just my 2 cents :)

ChristianMossuto responds:

Cheers.

just ok

it's ok but where's the melody? where's the melodic rythm? It's repetitive and it can get annoying, but next time add some sort of melody in it or something. Just percussion gets boring fast when it's repetitive and not even exciting

doomshock responds:

i know man, i just suck at melody!!!!!!!!!! im trying find a way but all im good at is drum patterns lol..do you make hip hop beats?

good

it's soothing and relaxing, the chords you used work effectively together, though it sounds more like a jam song than an actual composed song, but anyways, it's great :)

giovanni808 responds:

I just sat with fl studio and thought.. I LOVE MAJ7. And then I found that fmaj7 went well with bbmaj7 and then I continued with these 2 chords the whole way through. I just added choir, bells and stuff, so yea it's kind of a jam ;) Thanks for the review!

it's great

the soft strings give a feeling of gloaming. Amd it's not too loud, it's very good atmospheric music. :)

Lightningpichu responds:

Thats the kind of stuff she likes, and exactly what I was going for :D thanks.

good!

well your lyrics are great, comparably better than Lil Wayne's about fucking bitches and stuff. Your lyric-writing is better, and the overall talent, you're great. :) The emotion in the rapping is also evident, it's great that you're not using auto-tune.

O-Prime125 responds:

Yeh thanks m8! :)

I wouldn't say techno

this doesn't sound techno, it's more suited to video game song. But anyhow with that aside I'll review this sincerely. It's good, almost sounds oriental but not really, anyway, you use a lot of repetition with your riffs. The piano-work is good, very ornamental with the arpeggio at 0:42, overall, good piece, not much to complain about

0976 responds:

lol I suppose it probably could be more fitting for a different genre. Honestly I wasn't really sure where it belonged so I was like. Techno yeah, sure that sounds good :D. I do need to work on lessening repetition and getting the originality up a bit, hopefully that will come with time. Anyway thanks for the review and comments, everything I should know helps :D

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