sounds good...
but.. the recording doesn't sound that great :/, how'd you record this song? there's a lot of outside noise I can hear
sounds good...
but.. the recording doesn't sound that great :/, how'd you record this song? there's a lot of outside noise I can hear
nice
great guitar playing and singing :)
ooh
sounds pretty great! The guitars are cool, the synth at the middle.. umm.. a few off notes, but otherwise sounds pretty cool :D
Kick-ass!
out of tune?
the third cord doesn't sound right... :/, but other than that.. good effort, also too much.. repetition, not enough variety. on the drums, the bass.. everything, you need to change things around a bit to make it more interesting, and work on your music theory some more. :/
Yeaaaa. I needed to change some stuff. Thanks for the review though.
ehh
well it sounds alright, but sometimes the melody sounds out of tune, and just totally destroys the atmosphere, do you know much music theory? Your melody could really use work.
far from perfect
kudos on trying.. but your drum sounds out of time sometimes, and the intro was a bit messy. This is also a song that gets annoying easily.. however great work on not being too repetitive. It's not the best song in the world.. but with some work, it could be better
Yeah, I know. I intended it to sound kinda off beat and such. I didn't actually mean for it to be good. In fact, it was mostly a joke. I kept singing this to my friend in class after P.E. and he was getting annoyed, so I decided to make it into an actual song, so I could actually show it to him. It took a total of about an hour to make. :D
good melody
the melody is tight, that part where you go down an octave worked. This is pretty good, it would work good for a racing game, or something like that, your breakdowns, though generic, work well, well that's all I have to say about this, hope you come out with something IMPRESSIVE next time
Glad you like it! don't worry, I still have a lot of projects saved.
good background music
not too exciting though, not many "explosions" as I'd like to call that point where a song reaches it's climax. However it does sound quite good, and I'll reward you for your efforts. I think this would make a good video game song, those ones where you run away from something or something like that.. just suggesting..
Thanks for the review!
good
the chord progressions work well and the vocals are wonderful, the emotion is evident, and with the music nowadays that's hard to see since everything is auto-tuned. I'm glad to see people like you guys still make music, however.. I think you need a drummer :P
ARGH, yes the drummer. You are so right.
We will be looking out for one, and for a drum too XD
Thanks for the support!!
Joined on 3/5/09